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Angels falling
From man's heaven onto man's land
This world is hell, blooming
And blood and fire, and roses
And wounds and pain, and love
And me, fighting again

Feathers swirling
Cut off from darkened wings, bleeding
Sliced and torn in an endless dive
Tears of life, crimson
Sometimes flying, mostly failing
From man's heaven onto man's land
Heaven in hell and hell in hell

Angels bleeding
The bliss of pain, cut me again
Wings I do not want
Bound to a fake sky
Chained to a cruel Earth
Hell everywhere, blooming
Reality, crash into it
And blood and fire, and roses
And wounds and pain, and both
And you, smiling maybe
©2005-2010 ~VisualPoets
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:iconformor:
Great imagery in this ... I can think up a lot of great stuff for this!!!!
:iconshadowofeternity:
um...this is a nice poem but there were a couple inconsistencies. you have all these lists of things (like in the first stanza) that just...run around in circles, confusing the reader. the line 'Heaven in hell and hell in hell' is really really redundant. hell in hell? o.0

i also dont understand why the poem is called heaven remade....the poem is really dark and has multiple mentionings of hell. i dunno. the title seemed to contradict the poem.
:iconmissy39811:
I Love this poem.He illustrated all my poems in my gallery.And I am sure the other guy would be great too. Your poem has alot of imagry into it.Excellent.

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~Emotional-Writings
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Thank you very much, Missy :)

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